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Post by Cayden King on Jan 3, 2013 18:36:39 GMT 1
This is a totally new character, so help to make the character and rp's better is appriciated, all thoughts, suggestions , ideas, praise etc is gladly excepted
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Post by Shogun on Jan 5, 2013 12:12:20 GMT 1
I enjoyed the rp quite a bit, the only thing I would say in terms of suggestions is go through it and proof read, this isn't an English class, but it helps to keep your rps looking good if you can at least try to keep all your periods and exclamation points in the proper places. Other than that I can see your character getting better and better with every rp, that's just how it works for me at least.
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Post by Cayden King on Jan 5, 2013 14:59:33 GMT 1
Thanks I'll try English grammar just isnt my strong suit lol
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Post by Shogun on Jan 5, 2013 15:02:50 GMT 1
I understand, as long as it's understandable it's good to me, you're like an English professor compared to some people I've seen.
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Post by Cayden King on Jan 5, 2013 19:53:43 GMT 1
lol thanks, but might have been a bit lazy on this one lol
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